User blog comment:Anobi/If I made a DMC game.../@comment-1164563-20111216071448

Lol'd. "'...and starts to suspect that he, too, is part demon.'" Starts? Only then? What about being run through the chest two paragraphs earlier? :)

Jokes aside, that looks good. I do have some critique however. I'd feel a bit leery of adding yet another hot-headed character in the series, like it happened with Nero. I'd like some variety in tempers. We don't have many "orderly" characters in the series for example, if you don't count Credo.

I like that you added a "good" demon to the mix, but, personally, I'd add some dark overtones to him. Well, maybe not dark, simply egoistic, to show that he is in it strictly for personal gain. The way you wrote it, he looks almost altruistic. I would do that mostly because a full-blood demon suddenly helping humans, even going as far as to "sacrifice" himself looks unnatural.

Dante being switched with Vergil... I don't see any reason why he wouldn't just up and go. Or, at least, explain who he is and then go. I don't see him helping Vie de Marli against Arius in DMC2, more than that, I'd say he is likely to show up on Arius side. Ar at least it should take another game in between to explain his change of heart. :)

P.S.:Also, speaking of Nero, you did exactly as Capcom did and didn't even mention him. :)

P.P.S.:"Anyway, more fighting ensues, possibly because the judge summons forth more demons, (like the other bosses already killed, go Capcom!)" - another must-have Capcom thing.