User blog comment:DanteVin/Admin Request/@comment-775152-20120120184516

Hi there! Sorry it's taken me this long to reply. I saw the post earlier and meant to bring it up with the other Admins, but I've been busy making characters and encounters for a DnD-like game I'm running this weekend, and haven't had time for much else.

First off, I would like to thank you for all the hard work you've done. Your presence on the Wiki is certainly notable, and we'd miss you if you were to leave. Now, about your Admin request.

It is clear to me that you do care about this wiki, it's community, and the quality of the content we offer: you are a regular presence and you leave blog and talk page comments, which goes beyond the basics of just editing. That is a big plus. However, I'm a little concerned about some of the grammar you use. I'm not saying every edit has to be perfect, but it seems to be a common occurance for you.

Take for example:

This Trivia edit on the Sparda page - There was nothing wrong with the original version, but the new one is overly word-y.

The change from "of" to "to" on Majin Form. - The splitting of the information into a new section is a great change. However, the correct preposition is "Reminiscent of Nelo Angelo", not to Nelo Angelo.

This edit to the Adding Content section of the main page - I know what you meant, but it's just not correct English.

It's not all bad news! I have also noticed that you've been getting better with each edit, and you've shown considerable improvement in just the past few months. You've even shown me a few of my mistakes! Being the newest Admin on the block myself, I'm not quite comfortable yet with handing out Admin status without first consulting the others. Give us a few more days to talk it over, and we'll get back to you, hopefully with good news!