User talk:Yuna.Fan

Plot Synopses
First off, I really appreciate how much work you're putting into these. However, I'm concerned that in a lot of places, you're simply regurgitating what the script said, often using exactly the same phrasing and even retaining appellations like "Master". The point of a synopses is really to derive meaning from the plot, by summarizing what is actually going on, rather than just rewriting the script. Lilith is a good example of a plot synopses that covers all of the character's actions while not muddying the reading with too many quotes (although a few are okay if their specific usage is integral to the action, like Lilith's "bitch" line).

Basically, could you try to focus more on summarizing the content of what the characters do, rather than copying down their words? If this doesn't make sense, it's not really a big issue, since the wealth of info you're putting down makes it pretty easy for another editor to sift through and rewrite. If you have any questions, feel free to contact me for clarification.(ಠ_ೃ)﻿ Bully!  06:45, January 31, 2013 (UTC)